Descriptive Writing

July 9th, 2015

Which pair in 3VT can create the most exciting piece of writing? As the reader I want to be hooked and drawn in by your writing.


8 Responses to “Descriptive Writing”

  1. Tabatha and Ryan on July 9, 2015 2:32 pm

    One night Amy was wandering in a dark city and stumbled upon an orphanage,so she went inside suddenly the wind slammed the door behind her.She went back to open it but it was locked! Then she heard young children singing to scary music and backed over to the door, but she tripped and then saw a little girl with blood on her hands…

  2. Connie & Ruby on July 9, 2015 2:39 pm

    As the girl saw the dog run past she realised it was a wolf trying to track her down. She started to run and run. After a while her mum started to call her but she did not come.”Lulu where are you?” Lulu did not come…

  3. Charles & Louie on July 9, 2015 2:47 pm

    One steaming hot day there was a tiny boy called Ryan he was 3 yrs old. His 34 year old mum didn’t let him go outside but he did. There was a wolf “dwoggy dwoggy,” he said but then “grrrrrrr, waaaaaaaaaaaaaa…”

  4. Naomi and joe on July 9, 2015 2:50 pm

    One horrid day a scream came from next door and then a big bang came.That night terrifying noises came from the neighbour’s house.A large ghost smashed the window and people ran for their lives.

  5. Lacie Bobby on July 9, 2015 3:30 pm

    Lucy is a young girl with long dark blue hair. She wore a pretty pink dress.
    One day Lucy was playing in her back garden.
    After a while she was started to get bored so she sneaked out of the back gate and wandered in to the deep dark woods.She wandered deeper into the wood then she saw a wolf and it chased her.Her mum was calling for hours …

  6. Chanelle and Katie on July 9, 2015 3:31 pm

    Millie was walking in a vicious storm on the road with the wind howling around her. Suddenly a hunter was chasing her but she manged to get home .
    The moment she got home she was soaking.
    As soon as she reached her home she collapsed on the floor.
    When she woke up the next morning her mum was gone…

  7. Tabatha and Ryan on July 9, 2015 3:32 pm

    In a dark never ending wood Amy was tiptoeing along,suddenly she heard a twig snap. She thought she was hearing things but then a growl, she ran and ran as a wolf was chasing her then the wolf pounced..

  8. Maddison and Jamie on July 9, 2015 3:33 pm

    At Emily’s house all was peaceful until at bed time she heard a crash and a bang came from downstairs….

    Soon STOMPS came..

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